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thread: Flashman

  1. #11
    Junior Member
    Jan 2016
    5
    Episode 1 (0BE8B49C)
    00:08 (OP narration) Twenty years later.... -> Twenty years later...
    01:28 (OP romaji) Supernova Flashman -> Choushinsei Flashman
    03:27 (and later as well) planet Flash -> Planet Flash
    04:28 Apply: have\Nto get
    11:05 Maybe 'I'm shooting them from in the mist!' -> 'I'm shooting them from within the mist!'

  2. #12
    Junior Member
    Oct 2012
    3
    11:05 Maybe 'I'm shooting them from in the mist!' -> 'I'm shooting them from within the mist!'

    wrong wrong wrong...........GUIS has it correct

    To use within.........you would have to say "somewhere within" or know the exact location.


    also using \N or hard breaks are not always needed.............

  3. #13
    Member
    Jan 2012
    83
    Two general mistakes: it's not "Super Cosmo Crash!" but "Super Cosmo Flash!" for Flash King's attack, and not "Dash Speed", but "Flash Speed".

  4. #14
    Member
    Jan 2012
    83
    Episode 06:
    Dialogue: 0,0:10:08.37,0:10:09.88,Default,,0,0,0,,Mag, What's wrong?!
    "what's"


    Dialogue: 0,0:11:19.78,0:11:20.95,Default,,0,0,0,,-Oh no!
    Mag says "Kono...": it should be translated by "You..."

  5. #15
    Member
    Jan 2012
    83
    Episode 07:
    Dialogue: 0,0:01:44.45,0:01:46.46,Default,,0,0,0,,That's looks great. Let's try that ride!
    I think there is a missing line before.

    Dialogue: 0,0:08:18.43,0:08:20.93,Default,,0,0,0,,-Stop playing around!\N-Damn you!
    I think the 2 sentences are spoken by the same guy (Bun?)

  6. #16
    Member
    Jan 2012
    83
    Episode 08:
    Dialogue: 0,0:03:28.43,0:03:29.89,Default,,0,0,0,,Where is this place?
    There is a "What?" before.

  7. #17
    Member
    Jan 2012
    83
    Movie:
    Dialogue: 0,0:06:31.99,0:06:33.91,Default,,0,0,0,,-What's happening to him?\N-What's going on?
    I think the same guy is speaking.

    Dialogue: 0,0:06:41.92,0:06:43.79,Default,,0,0,0,,What's up with him? This isn't normal.
    2 different people (1 by sentence).

  8. #18
    Member
    Mar 2014
    North Carolina
    44
    I think that episodes 8 and 9 should have been done together because of the plot. Even though 9 is not up yet, a double dose is best taken right away instead of spread out. The series is really good and I can't wait for more episodes.

  9. #19
    Member
    Jan 2012
    83
    Episode 09:
    Dialogue: 0,0:04:21.11,0:04:23.45,Default,,0,0,0,,Jigen! you're alive!
    "You're alive!"

    Dialogue: 0,0:04:45.68,0:04:47.01,Default,,0,0,0,,Give it to me!
    There is a "Let it go!" after.

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